Hi Guys,
Sorry for being out of pocket. I had a family emergency that I had to take care of plus increase workload and then the holidays (too much Christmas shopping). ;-)
OK... enough excuses... I'll provide you with another round of feedback but, for the most part, I would consider the requirements document to be in great shape. Remember that, while great requirements are key, the reality is that "good enough" requirements are what most businesses want. That is, spend the least amount of money for the greatest ROI.
Kris - for a Jr. BA you have done an awesome job on this role play.
Let me know if you are interested in maybe taking this exercise in a new direction. For example - given the final list of requirements you could create a Use Case diagram which reflects the user case model for the ATM system given the requirements. Of course, let's use a new thread for that. ;-)
Best regards,
- Adrian